=====Is she all that I'm not???=======
Is she all that I’m not?
Does she fill just the right spot?
Will she give you a thrill?
Betcha she paid the last bill.
You think she has what I got?
But you can’t teach,what can’t be taught.
She’s just a cheating thief
who hasn’t been caught…
And hook, line and sinker
you're just a silly fool who’s been wrapped and wrangled,
sold and bought.
‘Think she’s the cure to your ill?
Betch’a think she’s the real f*cking deal
As you walk blindly downhill,
‘don’t even know your own will.
Oh, but when she’s done, baby,
you most definitely will.
I here when she mates,
she goes in for the kill.
Too bad when she reaches it…
she’ll find there’s nothing left to steal.
And you thought I wouldn’t
but I can
and baby, I will.
So, is she really all that I’m not?
I guess you can’t lose what you never “got.”
What’s left to say, you’ve finally been caught.
And I haven’t even screamed, cried or fought.
You see, I replace what I lose
when I find that it can be bought.
You think I’m still yours
But baby,
I’m not.
So, here
I teach, the lesson
that you need taught:
for the record, she can have it all
everything...that...I...got.
I give it here without...
.a.
single-last-thought.
by shelbyshome
md.shelby copyright 2004-2024
Author's Comments:
"a fun, biting play on the boomerang that occurs when a cheating heart moves astray."
Reviews and Star Ratings for this poem:
***** 5 Star*****
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Labels: on life and playing with fire, poems on life, poems on love
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